Just one of the many helpful sites for writers run by Laurie Pawlik Kienlen,  the goal of her latest blog, The Adventurous Writer, is to share experiences in the hope that writers can learn from the mistakes and successes of others. Already on the blog are some great examples of query letters that landed her offers for representation.

Here's why Laurie's query letters are so great:

1. The introductory paragraph immediately captures the agent (or editor/publisher) eye and gives them an idea of Laurie's creative and energetic writing style.  Rather than launching into the typical 'I have a book about X and am looking for a publisher' she hooks the reader on the story from the start.
   
   Most agents and editors do not have time to carefully read entire queries.  They just get too many.  Instead, they will glance at the first couple of paragraphs.  If it captures their imagination then they will read more.
   
   Don't delay in showing off your writing style.  Give them an excellent first paragraph and then elaborate in the rest of your letter.
   
   
2. The query clearly illustrates that she has done her homework, listing important topics that will be covered in the book that will be interesting to readers.
   
   Although you will only be including sample chapters or pages in a proposal, give the agent a full overview of the book.  Explain what topics you will cover, what features it will include and any notes on what format you envision it taking.
   
   Avoid an overly-specific chapter outline that doesn't leave editors room for feedback, but show them that you have a good solid plan and not just a good start.
   
   
3. She gives the editor a reason to publish.  She sells the book by stating why it is topical and interesting, and elaborates on sales potential. 
   
   This lets the editor know two things: that a possible target market exists for the book and that the author has the initiative and savvy to research a target market!
   
   While you might be passionate about the 101 Varieties of Wild Tomatoes, how many other readers will be?  Make sure that the agent can see how this book will make a profit.  Perhaps you want to publish in time for the National Tomato Growers Convention, or you want to offer tasty recipes for each tomato variety that will appeal to cooking enthusiasts?
   
   Let the agent see that you are not naive about market forces and have given consideration to the realistic sales potential of your title.
   
   
4. She offers information about herself that says why she is the right person to write the book. 
   
   When you pitch,  you are selling yourself, not just your book idea.  The agent needs to know that you are a confident, capable writer with qualifications to back up your book.  They don't have to be University awarded degrees, or clips from the New York Times, they just have to show why you are in a unique position to talk about the subject.